Polished Project 2

Introduction

I wrote this essay about a woman who quit smoking. It show that smoking is not healthy for anyone and not for young kids or adults.  

Rochell 1

Laandra Rochell  

Atkins 

Comp 1 

October 10, 2020 

Quit Smoking Inspiring You 

Do you have a family member or someone you care about is a smoker? Does someone you know have cancer or another disease from smoking? This a life chance that will help someone quit with some inspiration for the confident movement. Don’t let cigarette control your life, let some help from a friend or family member aid. Families are worried about their loved ones if they can’t quit while they have the chance.  This ad is to let kids inspire you to quit smoking. There is a woman who is smiling like she has won a battle. Her eye tells you says that look at this drawing that my son created. The woman’s skin is reflected in the light like she was shiny a little. The smile on her face will you smile to just like her to make you proud. The smile was she was proud of herself to quit smoking before it to too late.  

The woman’s son named Nick who wrote a letter to his mom. The woman is holding it up to let the audience see the picture he made for her. Nick is 11 years old that he wrote to his mother. The letter has a drawing of a man smoking and an arrow was pointing to the right shows it will kill you’re the other side of the dead man’s body is a crying child. In the letter, it says,” Thank you mom for quite I know you can do it”. 

There is a program is called CDC, but it exactly called the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. CDC works 24/7 to help people with health, safety, and security threats. CDC helps save people’s lives and protect people from the health has high health security in its nation to accomplish was to conduct critical science, provided our nation against expensive and dangerous health threats.  CDC is responsible for controlling the introduction and the spread of infectious diseases. It detects and controls the outbreak of another disease that will cause us harm. We respect the (CDC) to keep us from harm that will need the most important. 

Beatrice is a mother to two boys, who live in New York. She started to smoke at 7, second at 11, and smoke regularly at 13. Beatrice’s son was 11, he wrote a letter to her ask to quit smoking. Beatrice now 40, she has more energy when she was smoking. She cooks more cause the food is more tastes better than smoking. 

       The message on the front is the audience to need to immediately. The message for letting your kids inspire you to quit. The message here is trying to help people that kids needed you the most. Smoking has kids that would take a toll on them if you left the world on them. If you smoke than you end like the man in the drawing. The man is smoking until his body can’t stand the deadly chemical and past from nicotine. 

I have family members who are smokers to relieve stress. I don’t smoke because it harmful to me and can cause cancer if you are long-term smokers. People easily get fool by nicotine in the cigarette to think smoking is good for them. Some people smoke around their children to feel good. But kids think it cool to smoke just like their parents to feel special for them. 

If the audience read her story that tells about Beatrice’s life experience with smoking. So, people watch the video, they understand her story more. Do you what to quit smoking for your kids? CDC willing to lean a helping hand with your smoking habit. The number to quit smoking is 1-800-QUIT-NOW on the left bottom of the ad. 

    Former smoker tells their life experiences of how smoking has changed their life forever. In the ad, the videos are shown on tv the tell how they look like in the picture. When you see them in real life, they look like they do not have a healthy life when they are smoking. In the ad video some on wires, bedridden, lost organ, or cut off limbs. If you don’t what to end up like them, quit smoking while you can.   

 

 

 

Work Cited  

 

CDC Organization. A program helps people, unknown date, information https://www.cdc.gov/about/organization/cio.htm. Assessed 11 October. 2020. 

 

Beatrice R. Ad. The ad to quit smoking, October 12, 2016, picture, https://www.cdc.gov/tobacco/campaign/tips/resources/ads/pdf-print-ads/beatrices-tip-print-ad-7x10.pdf. Assessed 30 September 2020. 

 

What CDC is doing. How they help protect the U.S., unknown data, information, https://www.cdc.gov/globalhealth/what/default.htm. Assessed 15 Oct 2020 

 

Story of Beatrice R. Tips of a former smoker, October 12, 2016, life of a smoker, https://www.cdc.gov/tobacco/campaign/tips/stories/beatrice.html. Assessed 11 October 2020.